I relate - relate
3rd stanza- freedome ahem oh deary me
amazed i am

I relate - relate
3rd stanza- freedome ahem oh deary me
amazed i am

Okay to be honest, now I am jealous. This has to be my favorite poem of yours without a doubt. The images of being free and the stars and everything. The organization was perfect and the words were just beautiful. Ever think of trying to get published?

Sole, that was beautifully penned, simple yet so unique style, just so creative...awesome!

That was really good! Was it about the Olympics? I love the Olympics!! Anywho, Another great poem. I really liked it. 5/5

luv natalie x-x

This one lifts my mood, thanks :)

Where do you get all your ideas, lol, more origional. I liked this one because it shows that freedom can make one a bit crazy (hence college kids) Good job again

The best of the poems from you I read so far :)

This poem has great pace, its really fast like running, well expressed, good luck in my contest! xx

Now, thats what i call a good poem, it was so well written and not forced, it flowed beautifully
xx