by Linsey
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This poem is truly if not the best poem I have read today. Any girl or guy could relate to this. Comment mine : ) |
by Luke
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Soo Much Love And Emotion.. With A Good Structure and Good Rhymes.. Well Done. |
by Carlee Ann
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Ann, that was beautiful, as always.. but I have a question. (Being as un-teenager-ignorant as possible,) At the end of the third stanza, did you perhaps mean "too"? Well, either way, it is BEAUTIFUL, just like you! |
by dora
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Beautifully written. great j0b a t0uchng write. keep it up |
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Ann, that truly beautiful penned..."We know the sun comes out again On a world that's fresh and new, And all the gifts we freely give Somewhere, sometime accrue. We know sometimes we have to wait For life to come around, And sometimes that it won't, but still There's some good to be found." take care. |
by BlueDreams
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Ann, beautiful penned as always from the heart, still remember what i've told you..? i'll comes again! ;) hugs. |
by Just Wishes
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I loved it. simple but the message was so clear. |
by Randee
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This is really good, i know what you mean too. i gave you a 5. if you get the time, check out my poems and stuff. thanx |
by Seductive
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Nice poem, love the concept, u should check me out. 5/5 |
by Bogie
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Dang!!! Girl, Your pen so full of passion |
by creeesta
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This is a lovely piece. It's also very true. I enjoyed it very much...xoxoxo |
by Tammy
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Ann, another beautiful, touching write. |
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O my gosh i cant stop readin ur poems lol i luv it |
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I loved this! And as sad as it is, I can relate. Great job! |