Comments : One of Those Break-Up, "He Done her Wrong" Poems

  • 18 years ago

    by Chelsey

    WOW!!1 did you say hate this peice?! UMMM NO TRY LOVE THIS PEICE! I am so thankful to the person who got me reading no-rhyming poems because I am loving them so much! I loved how here and there was a rhyme but the rest was pure emotion! That was awesome and PLEASE keep trying this style I encourage you..I liked!!! you defiantly get a five from me! and I am a person who votes honestly! I really liked this and especially the title!
    CHelsey-Lynn

  • 18 years ago

    by JustAFoolInLove

    I dont even know what to say! i'm soooo happy that you're writing again! i mean, even if this is a one-time deal, i've really missed your writing. and it was amazing, as usual. so deep... gosh i love you, kid! the new style is definitely gonna work for you, bud! anyway, i gotta get to bed, but i loved this, and if i could vote, you'd be getting a 5/5!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Amanda
    I agree with Chelsey....great job...

    love Ann

  • 18 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    Sooo..i'm thinking this is beyond spectacular.
    Mhmm.
    YAY!!!!! Miss Carlee is BAAAACKK!!! I've missed you like WHOA! And i remember always telling you that you needed to get online to poems-and-quotes more often. and you always said you weren't ready or something. I can't really remember.
    But, point being-welcome back!!! I've really really missed your poems. For so long, its felt empty, like all the people I love have just abandoned this place. But its starting to feel more alive to me now. Thank youuu!!

  • 10 years ago

    by ashley

    Wow thats a wonder full poem i think its great