I hope u guys like it, plz comment and make me one of ur favourites plz.

Because she was in the basement and she was screaming but no one heard her, but she looked at the letter that she wrote to her mom and da that she was going to die and she died

Its good

Ah ma cherie, where is the rest. although you've left me hanging, this poem is beautiful, and i long for more. sorrowful.

Can I say your EMO

I could really imagine what was going on in my head... was very graphic! loved it an di liked your rhyme keep up the good work.. i added you to my favourites also :P take care xxx

I could really imagine what was going on in my head... was very graphic! loved it an di liked your rhyme keep up the good work.. i added you to my favourites also :P take care xxx

I liked ur poem but the ending was a little crap

Wow that brought on a tear