This is a really sweet poem! It captures your interpretation (sp?) of love in a lovely, yet almost sad way :(
Keep writing, I'll check out more of your stuff
- Polly

A very desrciptive poem great work

Wow i like, great poem

Wow, that was amazing, sad though!!! Grapped me from the beginning to the end and I loved how the end surprised me, excellent job =0) Keep it up...

Hugs Sabrina