Fantasy

by Sora, The Lonely Poet   Mar 22, 2006


It is my fantasy
For it to be you and me
together forever
stronger than a feather.

It is is my fantasy.
For it to be only me
So i can live in fame.
Oh, but it's so lame....

It is my fantasy.
My Fantasy
My Fantasy
My Fantasy
My Fantasy
My Fantasy
My Fantasy

It is my Fantasy.
For it to happen to me.
For nothin' to ever change!
To be the way that it should be......

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  • 18 years ago

    by Chelly

    I really like this poem

  • 18 years ago

    by Chelly

    I really like this poem

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaylee

    Better flow but the repetition is a bit too much. Try and limit it to one or two. And maybe you should take a break from rhyming.

  • 18 years ago

    by PS

    This is good. it flows well and the rhyming is good. but the repetition of the phrase in the middle, makes it seem more like a song.

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