Great job
Good Rhyme
and Nice Flow
and i thank you soo much for givin me some advice at the Discussion Board..Thank you
5/5
awesome job
~TPOMH~

:(

pls cheer up.

read my poem "horribly unbearable dream" if you want to read something that will puzzle you.

this is good, i just feel worried. r u ok?

Wow, thats very cute, loved it
5/5

Christina is my X Girlfriend We Broke up like 5 or so Weeks ago..and She went out with this Guy named Mike...and they broke up not so long ago..but she wants him back..

Wow it was really good and had a good like rhyme to it i like how u show ur emotion in it keep it up :]

In my poem, "very best" i talk about shelly.. i miss her a lot. she's one of the very best that i can never see because she's so far away.

What a sad poem :( I feel bad that's happened 2 u. 4 get them if u can. if u really luv sum1 and that sum1 really luvs you, then they would regret if they'd never met you at all :) people love you, elnaz. never give up.

Hey... u dont have to borrow my shell, u have ur own... u just need to find it :) girl, i found this really cool site you need to see. they're accepting entries till april 30th. www.libraryofpoetry.com

I saw a signup sheet on my teacher's door! :)

Hey there girl! *sighs* I hate calling you girl. I really do! lol anywaze. a really touching poem. I mean it. beautifully written and structured. hey I do'nt know what this poem is bout but u know if u ever need smebody 2 talk wit i'm here *hugs* ruthie

I'm so sorry someone is doing this to you hun, you definitely don't deserve it! know that you deserve so much better. stay strong and take care,
-xXx-

Wow. This was a good poem I like it. Keep it up. REad some of mine that I wrote before I decided to retire.