I need your help.

by ♥LILI♥   Mar 23, 2006


You told me that I am the only person in your heart. You told me that it is not the same now. I did not know what to do after I love you too. I need you too, but I am scared of losing you. I thought I lost you and now if I let you back and than loose you I won't survive. Tell me what to do. Tell me how to act. I need help I need someone to tell me what to do. Please tell me how to act. I can not see you and not give you a huge with a kiss, but I can not see you leave one more time. Help me.

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  • 18 years ago

    by lOVER

    Heya bub. mm well this poem is a little all over the place.
    you should probably put your sentences into paragraphs so its easier to read (especially for poems).

    and you're rhyming... is kind of on and off. so just try to decide if you want it to rhyme or not.

    nice try though, keep going at it. i know you can create an absolutely fantastic poem.

    nice effort !
    take care my dear xx.

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