True love, a new feeling

by Tripp   Mar 23, 2006


Becky, its been 10 months and we\'re still going strong

i\'ve never had a relationship last this long

im telling you this now

although im not really sure how

i hope these words will suffice

and seem just a little bit more than nice

that now and always ive loved you

its a feeling so true, i wish i could put it into words

normally id feel like one of the nerds

writing this, but now thats ok

my love for you will never sway

i wish it would ALWAYS stay this way

ill go to the ends of the earth for you

its a feeling so unbelievably new

i call it true love

and thats what i feel...

true love

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  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    WOW i can tell u love her..just take it slow n continue to let your hearts guide you.

    I love the rhyme and I can tell shes' one BLESSED gurl...thnxs for commening on some of my poems, woudl you mind reading even more? Liek Suicidal Romance, Sw33t Misery, Another Round, Underneath Me, I can't see your pop-culture, my teddybear n what ever els.e..all my styles are diff. so if u get a chance to read them ALL thatd be great...i will comment on all and ur in my favs also u r good n i cant wait to read more.

    ur friend
    Lissa

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenny

    Great ending to the poem, you melted my heart, your a very talented poet. Keep writing :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaylee

    Becky must be som special, and very lucky, girl. I enjoyed reading this so much and don't really know anything to add to that so I'm going to vote and hope to see you write more :)

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