OMG THAT WA SSO POWERFUL AND STRONG I LOVED IT! KEEP IT UP AND ALWAYS REMBER NO1 CAN STOP YOU 2 SHINE BABE WITH LOVE ALWAYS

Wow, i love this. theres so many parts i can relate to, very well expressed:) keep up the good work:0) xxx

So much beautiful chaos! I loved it!

Another great write, though i am sure it wasnt fun writing. May darkness hide us from mortal eyes but not from the eyes of the dark.

Naerwen The Chosen Bride of White Rabbit

Hey, This was pretty good considering you recon your older poems are better. This is definately very powerful, for sure. I'd haev to say that the ending was my fave bit though. just breathe on it's own... brilliantly written.

Rock on
-Suzie
xox

Wow. Absolutely excellent. I'm at a loss... hmmmm... the fervor you create by repitition is exquisite. Well done. It is an extremely captivating piece. One of my all-time favorites. Nice job.

This is possibly, out of all the things i've read, the one with the most impact, it's incredible the way you can expressyourself, u are certainly gifted

Good god. And u say u think the quality is decreasing??? I LOVE this poem. It has beautiful wording, and i love it because it is written just like a prayer. The ending -Breathe is brilliant, because thats what i tell myself when it all gets to a roaring in my head.

Can't wait to read some more. :)