Ok - Considering I had some p[art in writing this piece of erm **** thats a little worrying. I am, of course, the friend who is better than you at everything - especcially basketball ( I thrashed you today)!! but it is an amazing poem v. original and funny, bit more light hearted than most poems not v deep.

Peace. [Sole]

I agree with Sole but it was very different plus I love Basketball *stupid boys thinking girls can't play. I'll teach them*

Lol, Another great poem, And noooo I wasnt snoring hehe :P
It was a job well done, Keep it up 5/5

luv natalie x-x

It's not very deep or anything but it still reads easely so good poem 5/5 :)

~StefQ

Great poem!

OK

A good read! i really liked this, it was original and interesting 5/5 for another cool poem. also cheers for all your comments on my work, really appreciate it :)

Hhmm, to tell you the truht, I didn't really like this one, the other comments are true, it was lighthearted, not very deep with emotion but it wasn't the best one that I've read. keep writing and you poetry will grow.

Keep on writing! :)

A very different poem, and surprisingly with all the mix up verses, the whole poem kinda fits in. in a crazy kind of way, its a very wacky poem and very unique so deserves 5/5.

This was... interesting...

Lol jenny you make me laugh