Woah!

Good Rhymes.. The Rhymes And Stanza's All Flow Really Well.. Congrats.

Magnificient work Kim, beautifully done I'm really glad you answered the Kyrielle Sonnet call, Superb job!!!

Oh wow... wonderfully written! So peaceful and clam, beautiful and soft!!

Beautiful, I loved it, but then I always have been a sucker for a sonnet!!

Very nicely penned poem, really liked it, great use of words too

all the best and take care
5/5

Beautifully written, the flow was perfection! Love it! :)

Good Rhymes Kim. Well Done On Winning The Manager Brag Day Thing.
;)

Congrats Again For A Superb Poem!

Very pretty Kim....
Love Ann

Awesome write! The poem was short and sweet but the flow was flawless.
You are truly talented!! 5/5

Oh!!! My, a totally awe-inspiring read
to say the least. Like breathtaking visual
inkling so beautifully written it is a great
write no doubt. Write On,
Bogie

Great poem. I actually felt like I was out in the middle of all these trees and could feel Autumn's Breeze. Amazing. Don't really like how the last stanza has 2 lines and the rest have 4, but still a great poem

5/5
Bryce

EEEAARRRRGHGGGGHHHH!! How can you write something so beautiful with such a lack of effort? I know you don't have trouble, because it flows too well for that.

I love the style (kyrielle sonnets are amazing) and the serene atmosphere you created is sooo peaceful!

I can almost hear the sirens singing right now.

BEAUTIFUL WORK!!
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