A love taken from me

by eric   Mar 24, 2006


You and me walking on the beach
on the most starriest night
everything was going great
everything was just right

i thought to myself
finally a girl that past my eyes
thats all about hellos
instead of goodbyes

now in my heart, she is in
my love for her, ceiled within
with her holding my hand
true love, i now understand

with the sand between our toes
and under our feet
we step upon the hard concrete
and head down the long narrow street

we stop at an icecream stand
and you got your favourite brand
and as we leave, we thank the man

if she looked closely at my eyes
i swear she'd see hearts
every glance she gave me
were like little love darts

im telling you this
because that night
we had our last kiss
it was my greatest fright

in the distance
within the far
with so much resistance
an uncontrolling car

and to this day i think to myself
why god... did you let me see
the love of my life taken from me

how can life be so cruel and so unfair
now the only way to talk
to my love is through a prayer

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  • 18 years ago

    by ~XOHOLLYOX~

    That ones good eric...very sweet, but then very sad:( man i really need tog et some pointers from you tho...gahh good writer..lol...later gater

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Wow, completely amazing....u r sooo talented.....thanx for saying all those nice things in your comments.....and no, the rape stories rn't true....purely written with inspiration from girls i know....thanks again and comment back soon! Lata handsome