Like the other one, It was good. Your expressing your feelings very clearly, I just think Maby try and put a rhyming scheme into it. If you need any help just let me know.

luv natalie x-x

Very good rach i can feel your pain so sad yet you keep trying , always Rach xoxox

I totally can relate to that poem - its really gd - can u comment back plz?
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I liked this one, Although it seemed quite cliche to me I have read so many cutting poems now they don't see to have a twist. This is an older poem of yours and the emotion was great really interesting. Keep up the good work~mel