Comments : Yummy guys

  • 18 years ago

    by Sole

    Erm . . .right . . . Is that you 'Brainwave' :S I can't help but worry about you sometimes Jenny . . .

    Peace. [Sole]

  • 18 years ago

    by azlan26

    Umm yea
    so poetic
    UR CRAZY

  • 18 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Good poem, lol
    xxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by ashley

    I like it but i didnt really get the last stanza it may just be me but i dont know im confused but i really did like your poem its great

  • 18 years ago

    by imnotlikethem

    LOL.......that was good and funny......sorry it took me a while to look at them.......keep writing hun...
    xoxo
    Cassie

  • 18 years ago

    by Stabbylou

    Lol, great stuff, we all know what that's like. i like your poems, they're perceptive and quirky, very nice :)

  • 18 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    Comparing a fit guy to ice cream...interesting....and yummy!
    I liked the one liner noise words, you know which I mean, it split the stanzas up in a tuneful way.

    Good job.

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaylee

    It's different and all, which doesn't have to be a bad thing. I mean, never read a love poem like this.

  • 18 years ago

    by Daze

    Lol, cute and funny poem, very cute. I enjoyed reading this poem, I like the "ooohh" and "aahh"'s, very good, great job

  • 18 years ago

    by mkml

    Thanks for the comments on mine!

    Btw--this poem was excellently cute. =]

  • 18 years ago

    by *~vixen~*

    This one is so true
    and funny.lol :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Laura Ash

    Another great poem! It kind of made me laugh in a good way

  • 18 years ago

    by jamie ellen

    Haha funny thumbs up

  • 17 years ago

    by restless soul

    Lol, this poem is so funny it made me laugh out loud. I loved the extra sounding words you used between the stanzas, it made the poem great and a light-hearted read.