Comments : Dance with Death.

  • 18 years ago

    by Xox P.a.U.L.i.n.A xoX

    Oh your the one in the poem challeng thing :)
    this is a good peice, it short and just right :)
    5.5 Take cAre
    beautifuldisasterxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashley

    Once again, great poem 5/5 ~ash

  • 18 years ago

    by Gemma

    Awwh! That poem is really pretty =]!

  • 17 years ago

    by X~Angie~X

    Amazing poem. i love it. it has great flow.. word choice.. adn rhythm.. its so good.. i can relate to it.. i kno how u feel.. ur very talented.. keep writing... great job..
    take care
    angie