Dont give up. ever.

Thats easy to say
but do you mean give up on love and risk someome you love so damn mutch is gonna hate you?
or don't give up on life and try to find an other girl?
love is one messed up thing I tell you!!
*sigh*

And don't I know it - I'm in the same predicament - I just haven't told . . .yet . . . I can relate. Nice words.

Peace. [Sole]

Aaahhaaahhhaaaa tah for your comment... pfft. You'll get by :] good poem tho xx

Haha you can all say you get by but I still don't know what my use on the earth is, it still hurts when I think about her. every day even now my hearth gets pull out. but you just live your happy lifes :P

I say : never give up =) i mean this, if you can't win his love then be his best friend or try to be =) nice poem =)
5/5

~StefQ

Um . . .StefQ, umm . .ya, he was talking about a GIRL. lol I agree with StefQ, exept, be HER friend if you can't gain HER love. but like he said, NEVER GIVE UP! 5/5

Indeed rose you are right ^^
and so I did

Great poem the flow is a little off only because there really is not any ryhme to any of it and then there are alot of some very long stanzas. Try and put a little more emotion into your poetry. How did your heart feel achey breaky your skin did it crawl when you were around him or did you have this burning sensation on top of your head??? Do you know what I mean??

Please r/r/c rose colored glasses