This was good, but i felt it kind of lacked description and it didnt flow very well.. but there was good imagery and i liked the bit about the moonlight! :)

Its a good peice, though i think you could have put much more into it, the expressions are good but rather basic.

the imegry though is fantastic, esspessially that of the moonlight upon the blood. good peice in general

Different and effective style. I like the two sentences stanza... adds impact and emphasis to the short and speechless tone of the poem. Good write. 5/5

It's a very short poem, with a strong meaning....I think you did it just right!! Again you used beautiful words and made this poem unique, like only you can write them =0) Take care...Good poem

Much Love Sabrina