I also went to the beach for the weekend and i got like 2 weird calls(i'll explain more later) and AIDS stayed with us for the last night!!! and i was like DA.MN! but she turned out to be ok....and it was soooo funny cuz we were playin cards adn shit and the hotel was fuc.kin awesome!! it had a hot tub!! haha anyways yeahh...

I have had a similar dream to this one...I love this poem honestly. It seems just the right length and it has fluidity. Thanks for commenting on my poem and i hope to here from you again. Add me to ur favorites and ill add you.Thanx.
[Theo]

I really like this one. keep it up!

Wow i loved this piece, short and sweet, but yet, it held so much meaning. very expressive and truly detailed. great things to look for in a poem. i loved this. job ewll done. 5/5.

-Ashlei.