An excellent piece here. I especially loved these lines;

"the vessel of my mind
holds my soul captive
the world only sees
through the glass darkly
admiring but afraid"

Thank you for the comment and vote. =]

Your ability to create such bold imagery is mind blowing.
As I read this, I found myself lost in your words, completely oblivious to my surroundings...Well done!!!
Take care and keep it up~Holly

Wow..I'm extremely impressed by this poem! Your sense of creativity really shows through your style of writing. I love your descriptions...

"the vessel of my mind
holds my soul captive
the world only sees
through the glass darkly
admiring but afraid"

Lovely...I get a clear image in my mind when I read that stanza...very well though out and perfect choice of words! 5/5

Good job and thanks for your comments!

Exquisite write, bravo, as wa spointed out that second to last verse/stanza was superb, magnificent, excellent work!!!

Awesome write
this poem was superb it was great in all aspects

5/5

~GLASS~

And for me....the vessel of my Soul
holds my mind captive...

I am happy to have found your voice.

Gloria! you simply blew me out of my mind with this one. this is simply fantastic!! not read your work in a long time and i know now what i missed!

love and peace
shobhana

I dont know how u did it but i could really taste this!!! amazing! good luck in my contrest xx