Wow - that is an awesome poem, I absolutely loved it!! It deserves 5/5 !!

Peace. [Sole]

What an interesting poem, it's so different. Your descriptions as always were magnificent and beautiful. I could picture your words and feel your emotions. The stanzas where you talk about the other person, and you "kissing life" really touched me, and it reminded me of someone I know. It had a great ending too, but I think on the first line of the final stanza you meant "I know that YOU need me."
Great job.

Aww.. that was so sweet.. i dunno, it made me feel all warm inside.. hehe. i like ur phrase "I'm kissing life".. it says so much.. ur topic is awesome, too.. and ur rhyme scheme fascinated me.. i just love this poem.. :D its so.. i dunno how to put this.. like optimistic in a pessimistic sort of way :P.. looool anyway, it just feels good hehe
take care
ur doing great
NannO

This is my favorite piece out of all of your poetry. It was so sweet, and creative. I can't explain it, but it made me think.

Deffinitly got my 5/5.

Chelsey

What an imagination , just wonderfull poem i loved it , it's so extremly well written from the title till the end!! one of the best i ever red :) keep writing :)

~StefQ

This was different. Really good though, It was great how you kept repeating "But im kissing life" Im not quite sure what thats meant to mean, But it sounds really good, And goes well with the poem. Keep up the great work!! 5/5

luv natalie x-x

Life can be beautiful like nature sometimes - finally a positive poem - ive read so many depressing ones lately
Great =]

Aww, I really like this poem, every line I read, I could picture it as I read it, It was truely beautiful, I loved the scenes you used to make your poem so vivid. This was absolutly amazing, I've never read a poem like this, I have to say this is the first poem about nature that I've read, and I loved it. This poem is really relaxing, It makes me want to kiss life too. I completely understand what you are trying to say in your poem, it was wonderful, great job.

Great Poem, beautifully written, life is a great thing and you captured some of life's great moments in this poem, fantastic.

I like this one to,
your a way btter writer than me

Yet again, not my type of poetry yet still beautiful.

I am not real sure I got it, but I am sure it meant something to you. But I think it was supposed to be about learning to love/live life? At any rate I found nothing wrong with the poem at all

Wow, I love the imagery in this poem. It feels like you're actually there on the beach. ...

"Surfers pounding the
Ocean with their boards.
Hearing everything I feel."....

I loved how you worded that! great job and thanks for commenting on my poem! 5/5

Love the flow :)

I have never read ne of these poems, but i think yours is going to make me, now! Keep up the greatness!

Wow, that was really good. Absolutly amazing! Keep it up!

Wow...awesome job! I do not write in this style as I find it difficult but you did a lovely job!!! Once again you have out dobe yourself! :)

Life is a glorious thing that should always be embraced, but sometimes we shun it away. This poem was very optimistic, a light in the dark. I liked it, keep it up.

I loved it i understand it it has feeling good job

Wow, okay, its awesome, again. I cant believe i am reading such flawless poetry, you are so awesome. Oh, i cant say how much i love all your poems.
xxx