This is very good/ Have a good tyme writing poems that show how you feel. You are an awesome poet Sk8erchic

Wow, that was great
and thank you for the wonderful comment

You really expressed your feelings great job hun keep writing and take care sarah x

Very nice! i liked how it kept repeating

It was fun
but now it's done

i really liked it! short but sweet lol. thx for the comment!

I lived this poem a lot! I read between the lines, and got a lot of it. YOu made this poem a masterpiece and I ave to say that you did a wonderful job with it. It was simple, yet so powerful. You have a gift Bubblez. Keep it. Great job!