Aww the sadness
Loved the repition of die
Im writing one now

Nice. you've really nailed the "common" worlds oppinion about our lifestyle.
very good 5/5.

I agree completely with your point of view here... Nice job on stressing such a major point in outstanding words!

"Pointlessly.
Hopelessly.
Helplessly.
Unjustified.
So many more animals
Will die. "

Strong finish...I totally dig this one.

[lostlaureate - come find me]

Its good, strong throughout and good use of repetition
xxxx