Wow! This poem really was awesome I loved the way you wrote about the country and I agree in many of the things you wrote! Your really a great poet keep it up! ^_^

LOVE the poem Banta!! It was great! I feel really the same way about our lovely U.S.A. I don't feel like our morals are being kept. It really is a shame.

Keep it up!

-your friend-
Artimis

You made good points in it. My favorite part was about the price is right thing lol. Nice job 5/5
-Vino