Hey, i hope its just words and some agrression, hope everything is fine, if in case u need something to hold on then just read a beautiful poem (My Unbeatable Faith), u hv all the answers in that.

stay strong and take care of urself

A deep and well put poems, but with a little advice review your work be for submit it. Again very good poem....NJ

Very cute poem good work

Awww thats so sad to hear.
but hey wateva happins,happins for a good reason....sp smile and be happy you lost nothing.....the person that took u for granted lost everything.
5/5......very strong and i liked it alot.

:) tkcare.

sonam

Sad but great def another 5/5, all your poems are fantastic I love the way you word them keep them coming hun and take care sarah x

Awesome Poem. Very well written. All I have to say is don't you slang terminology. instead of using u or r, use you or are. also use apostropy's when need. other than that awesome poem.

Very nice poem, many people can relate to that kind of relationship. I like the pictures you used: uprooting the relationship, love from a stone, etc.

Since you have it in the love section, you should go through and write out all the shortcuts (u, r, 4) unless you want to put it in the slang section.

Good work!

Thanks for your suggestion -Joe and Ann. now i have sucessfully edited it.

This poem is the best poem ever.. you really poured you heart out on this one...good job