Comments : In mymind

  • 18 years ago

    by Katz

    Oh wow, I really like this one....left me speechless!

  • 18 years ago

    by LiL K

    I love the imagery in this poem--you can just feel the emotion! I know exactly how you feel about acheing for someones touch.

    Keep up the awesome work! 5/5

    Thanks for leaving a comment on my poem btw!

  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Wow! This is breathtaking. Your vast attention to detail really makes the poem come to life with vibrance and passion. I absolutely love this part:

    "like flaming brandy
    hot, biting, sweet
    intoxicating"

    I also found the ending to be quite brilliant.
    Take care and keep it up~Holly

  • 18 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    This is beautiful, I'm speechless. A pleasure to read...great job.

    love ya, Ann

  • 18 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Wonderful, It had a resplendent sensual touch, very nicely done!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by glass*wall*prison

    Now this one was a peice

    great write

    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by MBG

    Aw it was so sweet......

  • 18 years ago

    by Tammi

    Wow do I love this it is so sweet and full of love great job keep it up 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by shaleace

    That's goood

  • 18 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    ..........extraordinary..........

  • 18 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    I like the way you describe the dream - very nicely chosen words, great flow throughout.

    love and peace
    shobhana