Oh wow, I really like this one....left me speechless!

I love the imagery in this poem--you can just feel the emotion! I know exactly how you feel about acheing for someones touch.

Keep up the awesome work! 5/5

Thanks for leaving a comment on my poem btw!

Wow! This is breathtaking. Your vast attention to detail really makes the poem come to life with vibrance and passion. I absolutely love this part:

"like flaming brandy
hot, biting, sweet
intoxicating"

I also found the ending to be quite brilliant.
Take care and keep it up~Holly

This is beautiful, I'm speechless. A pleasure to read...great job.

love ya, Ann

Wonderful, It had a resplendent sensual touch, very nicely done!!!

Now this one was a peice

great write

5/5

Aw it was so sweet......

Wow do I love this it is so sweet and full of love great job keep it up 5/5

That's goood

..........extraordinary..........

I like the way you describe the dream - very nicely chosen words, great flow throughout.

love and peace
shobhana