Sad but good... keep it up!

Great poem keep writing and take care sarah x

Wow I like this !!! I like your style with it lol i like everything about it!!! Keep it up!!!

"and it's too late to realize I'm only choking myself" GAH THAT IS SO GOOD! I love your persepectives on everything! You're just such a great poet Sean! Gah, I get so jealous lol. Hope you write some new ones soon! Can't wait to read more!

Great poem.....i love the twist the reader realises by the end...great work!