Comments : Dreams of Desire

  • 19 years ago

    by David

    You are a good writer, I like the way you make the words rhyme. You keep on writing more like these, and I'll keep on read them.
    -Peace

  • 19 years ago

    by Allen

    Beautiful writing :) I love your poem, I love the rhyme and the way this poem flows :) Lucky Steve ;) I wish you guys the best.

  • 19 years ago

    by MeL JoY

    i can totally relate to this poem!!
    youre such a great writer!
    take care
    MeL

  • 18 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Very nicely done!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Kenny

    Nice poem! Love It!!