Great poem! I loved your choice of words.

A lovely poem with beautiful penned, well done!

Beautiful poem :) I can relate really quite well! I really liked the stanza;

Whenever I feel like I'm lost
and don't know what to do,
I always seem to find a path
that leads me straight to you.

Such beautiful imagery!

Peace [Sole]

I loved your poem, the opening stanza had great impact, I especially liked the lines, 'This feeling that I have for you
Grows stronger with each day'
A great way to start the poem. The rhymes were also fantastic!! Keep up th great work : )

Some of it reminded me of a friend of mine and how I too don't ever want that person to leave. I thought it was okay as a love poem. Their really hard to write so anybody who has the courage to try I think should be admired.

Very good. There are alot of love poems but this one was a notch above most.
"That simple kiss on top of my hand
or your fingers across my cheek
Causes my heart to skip a beat
and makes my knees go weak."
I thought that was very well expressed. 5/5

A very heart felt poem.5/5

I really liked your poem thats how i feel about my boyfriend and I couldne see my life without him

Good use of simple pleasures
The last stanza was also quite impressive
You could try using imagery to express love, like nature perhaps
Keep writing =]

Good use of simple pleasures
The last stanza was also quite impressive
You could try using imagery to express love, like nature perhaps
Keep writing =]

I found this so romantic with a rhyming scheme to match. Tip? Write more poems they rawk....

[lostlaureate - come find me]

I REALLY like this poem!!! It shows how you feel and other people can actually relate to it.

xxxThanx 4 the comments; i'll take them into consideration immediatelyxxx

Aww this poem is so sweet. good job

Very beautiful poem. i can relate. the flow is very good, especialy the 2-4 rhymes. 5/5 keep up

Hi.....you are a very good writer..you should keep it up!!!

This is a really beautiful poem. I loved it so much! You had great word usage and it flowed very well and the imagery in it was nice. Great job on this. You are very talented. Keep it up!