This poem rocked! I really, really loved it! Your form of writing is awesome and very unique! keep it up!
^_^

Wow this is amazing!! itd make an awesome song:) xxx

Somehow I missed some of your poems...=( Doh'!... hehehe

This would make a great song... which part is the chorus? I think "beautiful is the pain/That causes her to cry/As the darkness begins to swallow her/she knows she's doom to die" Love that verse it would make a good chorus. =)

What type of band are you in? I can guess the type of music... mmmmmm Goth (is that a type of music? hahaha)
I mean heavy metal? I dunno.... Anywhoo let me know. What instrument do you play? The violin?

5/5 WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!