Well it was one of those thought provoking pieces but I fail to put those thoughts into words. Well it was good but....hmm...well can't think of anything to complain about so yeah it was good though not with the hook that makes it great.
I think of it in simple terms you have one road to god its very narrow you fall of it you either catch your self or let the devil promise hell catch except he doesnt and lets you fall you were innocent and now your not and your burning in hell with him the seven colors of fire the seven deadly sins because you realize you wanted to fall in the first because you were tired of walking the same path
I can see the different forms in which fire takes but i fail to envision color, since that's what i was interpreting your title as. i enjoyed the interpretation of how the devil preys on the vulnerable but i wish i could envison more color and sound effect in your words. overall, great write. your gifted. lots of love and peace. take care.