Comments : The Seven Colors of Fire

  • 15 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    Well it was one of those thought provoking pieces but I fail to put those thoughts into words. Well it was good but....hmm...well can't think of anything to complain about so yeah it was good though not with the hook that makes it great.
    ~Faith

  • 15 years ago

    by UnToLd TrUtH

    Great poem! 5/5

    Mallori

  • 15 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    Wow I loved this poem.. I'm not really sure what it means but it felt so powerful..

  • 14 years ago

    by Hurtingsoul

    I think of it in simple terms you have one road to god its very narrow you fall of it you either catch your self or let the devil promise hell catch except he doesnt and lets you fall you were innocent and now your not and your burning in hell with him the seven colors of fire the seven deadly sins because you realize you wanted to fall in the first because you were tired of walking the same path
    Take care
    xxHSxx

  • 14 years ago

    by why is life so miserable

    Awesome poem 5/5 cynthia m. x]

  • 14 years ago

    by The WriTer

    To me it just says that the devil feeds off innocent people, which is a good interpretation of what the devil could be.

  • 13 years ago

    by linkhorizon

    I can see the different forms in which fire takes but i fail to envision color, since that's what i was interpreting your title as. i enjoyed the interpretation of how the devil preys on the vulnerable but i wish i could envison more color and sound effect in your words. overall, great write. your gifted. lots of love and peace. take care.