Wow. I think you have captured my feelings in those few lines perfectly! We have something in common . . . I have to admit, the poem seemed a little off at times, but with time, that will improve as you write more. Which I sincerely hope you do :) Nice work.

Peace. [Sole]

Wow this is on of the greatest poems i have ever read you should definetly keep writting it's wut you good at from wut i have read of your work.

Hunny thats sooo sad. why???? i want to know whats wrong with your shattered heart. i believe in the saying, you can only break my heart once, but after that theres nothing left to break. but who broke your heart? and it shouldnt be your progotive to pick the pieces up that a dumb person shattered in the frist place

You just totaly summed up how I'm feeling in this poem! your a great poet and I look forward to reading more of your work!

Cez xxx

(thanks for your comment by the way x)

Wow! This is a really good poem!
Thanks for commenting mine..