Really cute poem.. very original

Hey Lissa,

This is really a very beautiful poem, and i am not talking abt the flow in this one as i could feel the message behind this and thats what matters to me, very nicely penned

all the best and take care
5/5

When love outshines anything and everything... it can be all that you think about.... you write about such a variety of things, it's really overwhelming... but i love your style... and the way you write so much joy.... i dont think i've read one sad poem so far... that must mean you have a happy life right now... and i'm happy for you.... i just want to tell you though.... be prepared for God to test you... he's been testing me for awhile... and he tests those he loves.... test could also mean disapline ...