I really like this poem! its crazy how i can completely relate to it! but its really good! 5/5*

"I'm as flimsy as a plastic butter knife." a very interesting and original simile.

I liked this poem, once again. It had meaning to it. The thing about love sometimes is that you sometimes have to let your loved one go. I can undertand and kind of relate to it about how you seem to make the one you love so sad. If you aren't very great with yourself you can't be too great for the ones you love. It is a sad thing, but it is inevitable.

Oh wow i loved this poem, especially the ending its so sad, someone filled with regret for what they never gave in a relationship. Fantastic write.

Take care, Lise

The descriptions are very original, I really like them. I love the whole message, and the way your poem is written.

Good job!

XoXo
Gaby

Your flawles flow delivered your message eloquently

One of your best..
Keep on writing on what u like and feel..

Aw, I feel so very sorry for the person this was written for. But it was a lovely way of putting it, all the same. :-)