The build up and tension was fantastic.
Good write.

*Runs to bathroom*

O0o..cant wait for more...hah got me excited!! haha

Thankz ppl, i enjoyed writing this 1....i will try 2 post part 2 either 2day or 2morrow...

Great job def got my 5 vote keep writing and take care hun sarah x

I am SO sorry, i havnt finished prt 2.... TT___TT
*hides* i have been a VERY busy "artist" and "writer". yes -.- i do have a life outside of this cyber mainstream. i am proud 2 say i play electric guitar, and i am working on a series of comic stirps.
neways, best wishes 4 me getting the next 1 finished. i PROMISE, as soon as i have time i will finish it.

This is interesting :)