Comments : Just to be with you!

  • 18 years ago

    by Becky

    Please tell me watcha fink
    Becky x

  • 18 years ago

    by skyfox

    What an extraordinary poem. It clearly depicts the delemma when you are desparate to be with a lossed loved one. WEll done

  • 18 years ago

    by Jordi

    This is brill!!! :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Becky

    YAY JORDI!!!! fanku!! lol
    Beckz xx

  • 18 years ago

    by FASHIONISTA

    Aw....This is a cute poem..I'm sorry that your grandad passed away:( Thank you for the advice i'll try it somehow=P Anyways excellent poem! Keep it up!
    xxx
    *van.e.ssa*
    xxx