Comments : My last moments

  • 17 years ago

    by Fallengod667

    Wonderful poem, I really like how it was structured, very original. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    Nice job. Very emotional
    -Vino

  • 17 years ago

    by sarah

    I loved this poem, very powerful def got my 5 vote keep writing and take care hun sarah x

  • 17 years ago

    by The Black Angel Lloyd Rose

    Well flowing, smooth all the way, keep it up. you are quite talented. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Another Great poem

  • 17 years ago

    by Zach Armitage

    Just as vivid and poignant as th last poem. i really like your work, tho it does make me sad.
    xx

  • 17 years ago

    by zoe

    I love the way this poem rhymes, adds to the effect. good work!
    zoe xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by lonelynow

    Wow..amazing! i like the way the emotion increases as the poem progresses.

    lonelynow xxxxxxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by mier

    U really put ur thoughts out there... seriously a great poem!

  • 17 years ago

    by brkendown

    I like it alot and can relate! keep up the beautiful write! 5/5
    ashley

  • 17 years ago

    by StarlessNight

    That was really good. I really liked it. I am not sure exactly why, but it just hit the spot. You have a true talent, and thanks for the comment, it means alot coming from someone with as much talent as you.

  • 17 years ago

    by Rahl The Layman Lord

    Another well written and sad poem, just an fyi however, the only ppl who are alone are those that want to be alone

  • 17 years ago

    by shatteredsoul

    Beautiful

  • 17 years ago

    by jason

    Ahh im jealous i wish i was as good as u at poetry

  • 17 years ago

    by Rahl The Layman Lord

    Hey sis...another good one by you...well written

    -Jason-

  • Awesome!Very strong.5/5
    <3Amber

    please check out some of mine.

  • 16 years ago

    by Forever Depressed

    It's very emotional, a bit sad though, but I love it