Excellent poetry - The last two lines were really effective. I think I've done the same thing. Really great write.

Peace. [Sole]

Again the flow is amazing, and i like the rhymes. i really liked the line "You have set my soul on fire
from just a tiny spark" keep up.

Great job! It flowed nicely & wasn't all chopped up. 5/5*

Though I hate when people you use the word baby, the poem was really beautiful. The title wasn't strong enough but it did tie in extremely well. Maybe you should try and tap into that writing talent some more. HOnestly, I'd like to read your poems then. They might be nothing short of amazing;y pretty.

Awwe. this is adorable. Sounds like you really love this person : ) amazing poem, i truly love your writing.

Oh wow, lovely poem. Great!!! I loved how you wrote it, it has so much feelings put in to it. Great job!!!

Oh, and thanks for your sweet words on mine. :-)

Very sweet poem it needs a more endearing title. You write from within or at least I get that impression from your poems. It doesnt feel planned as love often isnt....its as if you spoke them onto the page and they came out this way....stunning.....

:o) thanks for all your encouraging comments... All the best.

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