Flawless, I really cannot say anything else except that. A really amazing write and definately one of my favourites. I found the rhyming and the flow particularly superb...I particularly liked the second stanza "Your, sweet comeliness, thrills me, so.
Pleasure, is your serenity" Beautiful. 5/5

"Kyrielle Sonnet" just beautiful penned, endless with lovely words.... absolutely beautiful. "No meaning that means more than we can mean, No proof that we are capable of proving, No grace that pain and sorrow might redeem. Nothing is the object of the passion, The void within the vastness of the void, The rule no rule can rule nor reason ration, In which all is created and destroyed." take care.

love,
gloria's glen.

Oh wow!!! Soooooo incredible!! I don't even know where to begin. The beauty of your words gives me a fluttering feeling in the pit of my stomach. If words were a haven then surely I could live inside this poem. I'm just...I don't know...speechless. Amazing job!

And please forgive me for not commenting more. I don't do it often enough. *smiles*

Oh wow Robert, how did I miss this one? I just love this one. So enticing... and specially the title... I just love the title. Great job once again.

Ur words r indescribable. they seem so well-put n well-thought out. u have a true talent n i look forward to reading more of ur work. later

Very nice. keep it up!

Loved the poem. 5/5 nice use of words and good flow

That was very good...I like the detail very beautiful writing...although you say each line is only supposed to have eight syllables but in this line;

\"Anywhere you lead, I\'d, gladly, go\"

that has nine syllables...so are you suppposed to have one that has nine or what?nevertheless very nice poem.

Anywhere you lead, I\'d, gladly, go

This is the syllables in it..

Anywhere-3 syllables/ you- 1 syllable/ lead- 1 syllable/ I\'d- 1 syllable/ Gladly- 2 syllables/ and go has one syllables 3+1+1+1+2+1=9

Wow...i dont think i could even follow those rules with this sonnet..gj

I love reading your poetry, you are one of my favourite poets and even though I may not comment on all your poems I do read them. Romantic, touching, beautiful!

Great sonnet, Robert. It's easy to see why you are such a favouritie on the site!

thanks a lot for your constant words of encouragement on my work.

peace
shobhana

Hey, that idea of yours to make a k. sonnet was great because you do it very well, it always adds an extra challenge to try and follow a pattern, so if its good, like yours, it must be really good!
if you have the chance, please check out my poem impulse
- Words are only treasured when they are truely spoken