I liked this poem very much, particularly the first line here, below.

"We won't die among the arms of solitude today"

"Forever starts with us today"

"Night is burned as the sun wakes the day"

I thought those lines quite profound indeed. A well written poem, in my layman's view. Well done. 5/5.

I'm gonna cry....idk y tho lol... awesome poem i loved it it was chqt written alll over it lol and i agree with the dude b4 me i love those lines tooo.... no need to copy them againnn lol....ohh yeah....damn i forgot,,,anyways SIGN IN!!! yeahh so um...love the poem...i really doo and ttyl

I was wondering where the fu.ck had u been...
GUESSS WHAT!!!

my aunt brought me tooons of chocolate like TOOONSSSS haha i don't miss u that much cuz i have my chocolte to talk to lol jk

and its cool ur gettin a new phone...it was timee...lol...

everyone thats reading this is probably all up in our bussiness.

NOSEYY PPPL!!!!

ohh yeahh i'm tryying to decide if i should dye my hair electric blue, purple and pink or go to the matchbook romance concert or just not waste my money at all.

I NEED HELPP!!! HELPPP ME DECIDEEE

this comment is gettin long

and it has absolutely nothing to do with ur poem..

but i already commented on that so w/e

dammnn u need ur internet back

i've got soo many funny things to tell u

i have pics of guesss who!!!

yesss u guess it...my broo

and he was drunkkk

and was teaching me how to danceee

FUNNNY!!! cuz i can't dance for shitt

anyways lattterrrsss

my handsss huuurrrrttttt

byebye nowww

Hi There
This is a great write,full of hope and sadness all at the same time
Take Care of You
Erely

Hey you havent seen me lately around... prolly dont remember me but i goto TPS now for posting this is a great poem BTW... i know you liked more of poems in the past but if you wanna read more at anytime... register into TPS (The Poem Sanctuary) and look for johnnyb123... thats me hehe :)

Aww i really like this poem!
Great job, Dont stop writing

Pretty :]