Woah, that last stanza really caught my attention, i know ive felt that way. i was gonna send you a private mesage, but i couldn't :(
but i just wanna say that ur a really good writer and to keep it up! im always here if you wanna talk to someone

ash

I love this poem and your other poems.. I can relate to this poem very much.. But keep up the good writing..:)

I have gave a 5 on noones poem since I been at this site, but this poem deserves it!! "Kudos" it reminds me of at poem I wrote called "NO LOVE" and also "Bitter Love" check some of my work out if you like it do add me to your favorites