Aww great use of rain as sadness - a bit like my poem u know u see the rain and...
I wonder if the rain can sue us for using its name all the time
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Beautiful again!! this is so sad, and u just knew how to write it down perfectly.. nice rhyme.. as for the flow, i suggest:
"Of misery and pain" .. add an "of" after the "and"..

and

"As the rain falls from the sky".. u cud remove "the".. to shorten the line so the flow cud be in better harmony with the rest of the stanza..

great job.. (no marks deducted ;) :P)
take care
NannO

Wow, I loved it. This was a very well written peice of work. The Flow and Rhyme was superb. You are a great writer. Keep the awesome poems coming!

~Joe~

I really liked how you had rain and sadness. The two just seem to go together. Now either I have a very overreactive imagination *which I do after all the years I spten trying to attempt to write* or your words gave me a vivid picture of someone looking up into the rain.

Fantastic write, I loved the wording you used, and the way it fits into place perfectly keep them coming and take care hun sarah x

This is just a brilliant write. the use of wrods is just amazing and how you put it all together made it an amazing piece to read. you put so much detail into it which keeps me hanging on. and exploring through whats going on. Surely a new person to add to my favourites. your writing is just so pure. i love it. so much.

Kat

I really like this. esp:A shroud of crystal drops
thats hot

Again like i said before... you are a very talented poet...you always know what words to put in the poem..good job

Shrugging off the hate
Of those who pass me by
I can only sit and wait
As rain falls from the sky

this is so good. it really touched me. nice.

It touched me, it was sad but it was nice and i'm glad i read it, keep it up
xxxx