Comments : X Read Me

  • 18 years ago

    by azlan26

    Aww another great poem etc aww lovely etc bittersweet yay

  • 18 years ago

    by †Undone♥

    This is really good. I could feel it as I read it. Perfect

  • 18 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Wow, Awesome Poem once again. I loved it. Keep up the good work.

    ~Joe~

  • 18 years ago

    by PS

    Niice. i really like this:
    Try to understand me
    Read the dictionary of my soul

    and

    Stop hiding the truth behind your lies

    amazing nice job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Emma

    Awe wow. this is depressing. and i can relate to it very much. I understand where you are coming from. this is a great poem. perfect rhyming and flow. love it.

  • 18 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I liked this, well done
    xxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Mark

    Once again, a very nicely written poem..

    I liked the lines..

    "Recognise your power
    Before my world turns black"

    The ones you love have a lot of power indeed.. and it's unfortunate they understand the pain they can relase..