Comments : Time Passes On

  • 18 years ago

    by katie!

    A wonderful poem, really descriptive and heartfelt, a real pleasure to read, you certainly captured me with your words which were so full of love and devotion well done, well done...
    xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Luke

    Woah!

    Such a good poem, your poems get better and better, i really loved it. well done.

  • 18 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    Damn... I've missed your poems Bill... It's so good to read your work again :)

    A wonderfully written piece. So loving. Written from the heart... Always best that way :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Every single time I read a poem of yours Bill I am so lost for words? I think and I think like "hmm how do I make my comments different then others? I could probably tell you what I ate today and all but that'd be getting of the subject" so my comments will be like everyone else..THIS WAS SO BEAUTIFUL! That last line..wow! how powerful!! Oh I just loved this excellent job as per usual!
    Chelsey-Lynn

  • 18 years ago

    by Ric Hansen

    Very expressive! You know your with the right person when you feel that strongly about them! Very nice..Bravo.

  • 18 years ago

    by Cuddles

    What words can I say to possibly express how lovingly beautiful this is? I rac my brain and alas!...there are none. Such a beatiful masterpiece

  • 18 years ago

    by dReAMeRgRL18

    Wow what a beautiful poem. you have a great way with words.

  • 18 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    .......................marvelous..............................

  • 18 years ago

    by Cynthia

    Woah, you did a great job on this poem especially because of its touching subject Love. personally i find it difficult to describe all the good in Love, but you did it. you grasped the true meaning of that absurd four letter word, and put your wisdom to work. it was a joy reading this piece;; thank you.

  • 18 years ago

    by Malenda

    Absolutely Beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Malenda

    Absolutely Beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by ArWenBlacK

    Wonderful poem!!! keep writing xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Harley- Angel Of Despair

    The gets a 5. This is very inspiring and good/ keep writing. If you get some time read one of my poems please

  • 18 years ago

    by Dan Bloom

    K thats a really good poem!...its different...but i love ittttt seriously you need to keep writing!!!!! ahhhh

  • 18 years ago

    by eric

    Thats incredible..everyone of your poems is sooo inspirational great job 5/5