Change...

by unstated affinity   Mar 31, 2006


Change....
is the halting illusion of the reckless wind
such a lantern of heart intuition
drowning within the season
even though life has flourished...
even though love are settled...
but feeling can not be put into words
just as the little drizzle,
anxious to comfort the evening sun...
longing, even waiting in pain..
but look up and see..
the birds do believe they can fly
incomprehensive summer and autumn,still..
braving wonderful moment by and by..

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  • 18 years ago

    by Sole

    I agree ^^ try breaking the lines a littel to improve the flow, but the words are excellent, great poewm, really enjoyed reading throught it :)

    Peace. [Sole]

  • 18 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Awesome peice of poetry. I loved it. break it up a little, it will give it more flow and structre, other than that amazing Job.

    ~Joe~

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