It was really good i liked it alot!!

Omg your poem is really great 5/5 check my poems out hunni yours are phemonal

Hey there. I took a very long break from this website, only to return to find that your poems have gotten even better. Really love it, keep up the brilliant work sweet. xxx

Wow. thats amazing

That\'s a very interesting poem...I like it...especially the title...very nice...hope to read more.

Thats is a great poem! i know how hard it is to live in a lie...you are a great writer.

Wow thats deep, but remember not all guys are like that..it happens but there is always someone better than that waitin for u to wise up and make a better descision.

Thats was beautiful and very sad at the same time. awsome job hun loved it alot!!! keep it up. check out my poems if you get a chance
~lilia~

Your poem was really good i liked it alot!

Wow this one is sooo good! keep up the good work
-tynda

This is a great poem. Its one that makes you really think I like it tho its sad. great poem 5/5

Love it i can deffinitly tell everyone else dose to. ur a great writer and could go far if u want. make ur wishes come true and follow ur dreams and theyll come to you.
kate

Wow very interesting story...i like i like...keep up the good work

And poems like this is why your on my favourites list... ^^

Keep it up..
they a joy to read in a sad kind of way..

5/5

Breath-taking. A story of life of many wove into a powerful true tale of broken wretched love. Truth lies regretfully and Faithfulness is forever true. Sorrow breeds in these households. Thank you for portraying this, because the woman in this poem is a fierce battler of love.

Oh gosh babe! this made me tear up! it's so sad! and yet... i love it! hee hee! you are so good at this! and don't you dare lie to yourself by saying you're not! cuz you are so awesome at this! keep writing! well, i'll talk to you soon! much luv~Kim

This poem is great. I really like your poetry. Keep writing b/c I'd love to read more.

~hopeless~

Man shes crazy i wouldve said something.. well 5/5 keep up the work

Omgosh!! this is written perfectly!! i love the way you wrote it out!! its a sad topic but written beautifully!

Awesome poem i loved it!!
Its so simple yet so complicated...
So sad but heartfelt