Comments : This Lie Called "Love"

  • 18 years ago

    by Chelline

    It was really good i liked it alot!!

  • 18 years ago

    by katie

    Omg your poem is really great 5/5 check my poems out hunni yours are phemonal

  • 18 years ago

    by Ruby K P

    Hey there. I took a very long break from this website, only to return to find that your poems have gotten even better. Really love it, keep up the brilliant work sweet. xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Gabbi

    Wow. thats amazing

  • 18 years ago

    by Switchblade89

    That\'s a very interesting poem...I like it...especially the title...very nice...hope to read more.

  • 18 years ago

    by shannon

    Thats is a great poem! i know how hard it is to live in a lie...you are a great writer.

  • 18 years ago

    by Justin G

    Wow thats deep, but remember not all guys are like that..it happens but there is always someone better than that waitin for u to wise up and make a better descision.

  • 18 years ago

    by lilia

    Thats was beautiful and very sad at the same time. awsome job hun loved it alot!!! keep it up. check out my poems if you get a chance
    ~lilia~

  • 18 years ago

    by jennifer

    Your poem was really good i liked it alot!

  • 18 years ago

    by TYNDA

    Wow this one is sooo good! keep up the good work
    -tynda

  • 18 years ago

    by Krissy

    This is a great poem. Its one that makes you really think I like it tho its sad. great poem 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Lemon Square Bear23

    Love it i can deffinitly tell everyone else dose to. ur a great writer and could go far if u want. make ur wishes come true and follow ur dreams and theyll come to you.
    kate

  • 18 years ago

    by Johnny

    Wow very interesting story...i like i like...keep up the good work

  • 18 years ago

    by cLumsy

    Breath-taking. A story of life of many wove into a powerful true tale of broken wretched love. Truth lies regretfully and Faithfulness is forever true. Sorrow breeds in these households. Thank you for portraying this, because the woman in this poem is a fierce battler of love.

  • 18 years ago

    by DeepSoul

    Oh gosh babe! this made me tear up! it's so sad! and yet... i love it! hee hee! you are so good at this! and don't you dare lie to yourself by saying you're not! cuz you are so awesome at this! keep writing! well, i'll talk to you soon! much luv~Kim

  • 17 years ago

    by hopeless08

    This poem is great. I really like your poetry. Keep writing b/c I'd love to read more.

    ~hopeless~

  • 17 years ago

    by Im In Love What Can I Say

    Man shes crazy i wouldve said something.. well 5/5 keep up the work

  • 17 years ago

    by kallie

    Omgosh!! this is written perfectly!! i love the way you wrote it out!! its a sad topic but written beautifully!

  • 17 years ago

    by Sweet||Imperfections

    Awesome poem i loved it!!
    Its so simple yet so complicated...
    So sad but heartfelt

  • 17 years ago

    by LOnightOJmareVE

    Great poem there... It's real too... in spme people's lives... Good job.. Keep it up!