Comments : Behind my smiles

  • 17 years ago

    by tearstainedlies

    Great poem.. i can really relate.. aweome..

  • 17 years ago

    by xX-jess-Xx

    Yeh gd poem, i can def relate. i liked the way u expessed it! cud u check out my poem called "emotionally driven" thanx a bunch!! jesxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    O great poem!! I loved it, keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by PorcelainMoon

    Woah love it....so sad....allso so good...
    5/5

    love Dean xoxox

  • 17 years ago

    by PnQ Mod Account

    Very nice poem, Sarah. Full of emotion. You really express the sadness well.

    Good work!

  • 17 years ago

    by lonelynow

    I love this! i rly like the repitition xxxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by courtney

    Good poem and i can really relate

  • 17 years ago

    by Ariana

    I like this poem.. I think it's one that so many people relate to.. Including myself. I use to be able to hide behind my smile but lately i've lost that touch.. ANyways, it's a great poem.

    Ariana

  • 17 years ago

    by Perfectly Imperfect vaney

    Hey loved your poem. its deep. i love the flow of it. keep up the good work five all the way!

  • 17 years ago

    by The Names Craig!

    This is how alot of girls are these days b/c of guys who think they are pimps and crap.

  • 17 years ago

    by dee

    Holy lord... this is so good.. best poem ive read in quite a while.. i gotta tell ya. wow.. im actually speeckless.
    dee

  • 17 years ago

    by cherish

    I loved it...it didnt need huge words or bigger anologies...but it was beautiful..
    love,cherish..
    KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!

  • 17 years ago

    by sezz

    Good one!!!! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by tiffany lin

    I totally understand how you feel. great poem!

  • 17 years ago

    by Milton

    I loved it. I feel exatcly the same someitmes when I talk to certain people. It's too much sometimes. but I loved this, good stuff. :)

  • Hey so sad, it bring up past feelings for me. Well done on your rhyming and metre.
    Love MEl

  • 17 years ago

    by Kalgalath

    This is a sad poem. good point to it though.

  • 17 years ago

    by PorcelainMoon

    Aw, sarahhhh, sad.

    Loved it tho.

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by jolene

    Sweet very nice!

  • 16 years ago

    by Hey Brittknee

    This is EXACTLY how i feel, this one touched my heart a lot. It really flowed in my head too.

    ~brittany (MD)