Great poem.. i can really relate.. aweome..

Yeh gd poem, i can def relate. i liked the way u expessed it! cud u check out my poem called "emotionally driven" thanx a bunch!! jesxxx

O great poem!! I loved it, keep it up

Woah love it....so sad....allso so good...
5/5

love Dean xoxox

Very nice poem, Sarah. Full of emotion. You really express the sadness well.

Good work!

I love this! i rly like the repitition xxxxx

Good poem and i can really relate

I like this poem.. I think it's one that so many people relate to.. Including myself. I use to be able to hide behind my smile but lately i've lost that touch.. ANyways, it's a great poem.

Ariana

Hey loved your poem. its deep. i love the flow of it. keep up the good work five all the way!

This is how alot of girls are these days b/c of guys who think they are pimps and crap.

Holy lord... this is so good.. best poem ive read in quite a while.. i gotta tell ya. wow.. im actually speeckless.
dee

I loved it...it didnt need huge words or bigger anologies...but it was beautiful..
love,cherish..
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!

Good one!!!! 5/5

I totally understand how you feel. great poem!

I loved it. I feel exatcly the same someitmes when I talk to certain people. It's too much sometimes. but I loved this, good stuff. :)

Hey so sad, it bring up past feelings for me. Well done on your rhyming and metre.
Love MEl

This is a sad poem. good point to it though.

Aw, sarahhhh, sad.

Loved it tho.

5/5

Sweet very nice!

This is EXACTLY how i feel, this one touched my heart a lot. It really flowed in my head too.

~brittany (MD)