Ooh good job...even tho im a guy...u wrote girl....i can still relate...very good poem...

5/5

This girl sounds just like me-i like it!

This is a good poem really nice, keep up the good work.

Nice

Very sad poem, wording is great. Excellent topic! Wording is good and you wrote this poem incredibly.
5/5

I like this poem...Is written from your heart but this is the way i feel sometimes.Keep on the good work and take care of you.Best regards,XxX

Aww this is so sad..=[

i like it though..5/5

Great Poem, I can relate totoally! So sad but so meaningful
5/5
check out my poems =)

chelsea

I really like this poem, it flows well.

Related to this poem %100. Made me cry a bit. Well written.

That was amazing, your very deep. PM me i would love to get to know you =]

This was a short and very sweet poem. beautiful yet sad. and i loved it! you just said straight out how you felt.

Behind my smiles
No one will ever see
That the girl who is showing
Isn't really me

i loved that stanza. it really stuck out. a perfect ending to this poem. job well done. 5/5.

-Ashlei.

I cant relate to this so much.. and even though we hurt.. we can say we have strenght to have gotten thru it and are able to write about it to let things out

Im speechless this poem was amazing

I love all of your poetry.
he ones i read anyways.
:))
this poem in by far my favorite though.
I dont know why, it just is.
dont stop writing, you have some real potential.

And it would be greatly appriciated if you could comment and rate one of my poems.
thanks love!

-jesss.
Btw:: Im putting you in my favorites ;)