Comments : Tradgic suicide

  • 17 years ago

    by Samantha Jayneee

    Really good but sad poem =( you are talented

  • 17 years ago

    by xLongxXxLostx

    Thats sweet and sad, you're really good at writing, keep it up ^^

  • 17 years ago

    by Raychil

    This is a great poem. Very sad and emotional. You have a wonderful talent. and thanks for commenting on mine :)

  • 17 years ago

    by **..Shell..//

    Wow this is a really good poem. it conveys a story as well.. a sad one at that.. ur a gd writer.. keep it up.. xxshellxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Natalie

    Wow, This was really good. I loved the last stanza! Keep it up hun x-x

    luv natalie

    P.s Thank you oh soo much for the comment =]

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaitlyn

    My. thats so sad, but just so powerful and strong. how you portrayed the story. with such emotion within it.

    Kat

  • 17 years ago

    by lonelynow

    Omg. so emotional..so AMAZING! keep writing!! never stop!!

    wow wow wow

    lonelynow xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Hey this is a very sad poem and i must admit that u hv xpressed ur felings very well here.

    all the best and take care
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Aw that was so sad. very well written. 5/5*

  • 17 years ago

    by oldthings

    It's so sad =( Loving someone so much that you literaly can't bear to live without them. it's a great poem though, really great rythm and story to it. i loved it. good job

  • 17 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    Another fabulous poem!
    I loved it
    You defiantely deserve a high rating for this one
    5/5
    Love
    ~Em

  • 17 years ago

    by Jennifer

    WOW........this poem is sooo good, ur very talented at writing poetry, this poem left me speechless....well keep up the good writing 5/5
    Jennifer

  • 17 years ago

    by LostHopesCrimsonTears

    Really great one, flowed perfectly and was just beautiful!

  • 17 years ago

    by IVY

    That was really good . i loved the way it rhymed in some parts. COOL ! well check out some of my poems if you get the chance ..... later

  • 17 years ago

    by *Beautiful Disaster*

    That was a really good poem.. i enjoy all of your poems your an amazing writer... thank you for the comment... maybe check out my other poem.. this poem is definately a 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by SilenceBreaksTheHeart

    That was an amazing poem...I loved it...very intense..keep it up.
    5/5
    Breanna

  • 17 years ago

    by Fredaeya

    Thats sad but sween at the same time...*confused look* ur great at writing though and showing the reader the emotion ur feeling...keep it up! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Deana

    Your poems read like stories, that happens to be my favorite style. excellent write