I like the ways your poems are written, with the vocabulary and simularity in most of them. It makes a huge impact on somebody.Awsome write! 5/5.

Omfg!!!! that is an awesojme poem.... i love it.... i give it 2 thumbs up!!!...:D... keep up the good work!!

I loved that sooo much. and im glad u have the courage to say things others cant.

That was just beautiful you really captured me as a reader by it and how many people look at things! keep up the good work!

I love ur poem

Very abrupt ending, kinda like a punk song, it does something completely unexpected, but perfect all the same. it had really good flow, maybe u did something with syllables or something, but it was quite good. much luv.

Great poem. read some of under diguise poems and it said to check ur poems out so i decided too. he was right your poems are great. keep it up.

Gr8 poem. the ending was a bit shocking. the poem is small but says alot. keep writing:)